Moment

Things sink into dust. Yet there are no things,
and no dust. Candle wick shows the way back.

Yet there is no way back, and no way
forward. Just sit. Just sit. Wick

crackles, seated feet shuffle. Nothing
beyond this moment. Nothing before this moment.

~~~

Picture found here: http://www.chilture.com/meditating-on-tao-original-philosophy-chinese-painting-p-363.html

About skyraftwanderer

A person who enjoys writing short story things, poetry and other random things that come into my head.
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20 Responses to Moment

  1. thedawnerupts says:

    Beautiful. Resonating. In this moment. I love it.

  2. The sound of the gong happens seamlessly with your words.

  3. Claudia says:

    just cherishing the moment…nothing better than that and so difficult at times…

  4. dolbsterthepoet says:

    This resonated with me. It’s beautifully written and captures sittiing zazen beatifully. Love how you’ve used the candle wick in this rather than the more obvious candle flame. It’s fluid yet captures a moment in time, being present, perfectly.

    All the best,

    Leanne

  5. Nice. Beautiful capture.

  6. yelena says:

    this has such a soothing effect on mind…feels like i’m floating through the clouds. thank you~~

  7. Emily says:

    No things and no dust. A beautiful celebration of the Now.

  8. Wonderful, a much needed reminder, thank you!

  9. kimolisa says:

    very calming, reminds me to get back to that moment

  10. brian miller says:

    nothing beyond and before this moment….now is what we have…what an awareness it takes to get to that….def feels zen to me…smiles.

  11. 1emeraldcity says:

    I so believe in the Now…and this small gem captures that perfectly. I love it!

  12. Mohana says:

    Static…like it!

  13. beckykilsby says:

    Simple words.. magnified by the structure you’ve employed and the central images. Brief and compelling.. enjoyed very much.

  14. And if one can simply release, breathe – that moment is perfect. It is all we have – everything/nothing. Well said.

  15. ManicDdaily says:

    I feel like I have just meditated by reading your poem. Wonderful. Great enjambement. k.

  16. joanna says:

    this. is gorgeous and profound. i like this shorter-length-type piece from you. it packs a lot of thought.

  17. So very Zen…exquisite.

  18. Art Brûlant says:

    Very nice! I really like this!

  19. D... says:

    The word crackle is still resonating in my thoughts. And I loved reading about the artist of this picture. I want to buy it just to support the guy. There is something so moving about his story.

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